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I don't know, it's a random piece of inspiration. . Submitted by Katie ( Award 136), age 16

'Bless me father, for I have sinned'
'You have? yes, you have'
'Were you sleeping?'
'Resting my eyes. I am awfully tired. Blessing and forgiving is not easy. Now you! you thief'
'Will I go to hell, do you think?'
'Most certainly you will. Thieving is a crime. A serious one and you mustn't do it. Not ever! do you understand?'
'Yes father. Temptation is difficult'
'Temptation?! you disgusting boy! The devil himself will always try to tempt you. Always and you have failed miserably'
'I couldn't help myself'
'You can help yourself and you can put your faith in our Lord and he will give you guidance'
I am going to hell the boy thought I can't do no worse.

Comments (1)

user comment Candice says: Simple, familar take on religion. Effective and sometimes detail isn't the key and this is piece is a great example of that. Keep on writng.
Sent on Fri 3rd Feb 12

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