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My story about a ghost ship. . Submitted by Jessica (
170), age 10
aisha says: VERY FUNNY ENDING!!
Sent on Sun 18th Jul 10
Jessica says: This is a really fantastic piece of writing! There's loads of great description and you set the scene very well:)
I also love the comment you made about the tense of "doesn't"- many people who are much older than you wouldn't be able to manipulate the tenses that well and comment on what they had done!
I love the end line too- it's quite conversational and it makes it sound like a ghost story you might tell your friends at a sleepover or something. Well done!
Sent on Thu 15th Jul 10
Tom says: This is great work for a 10 year old. if you keep writing you could be a really good author one day!
Sent on Mon 12th Jul 10
Dorothy says: WOW! That piece of writing was amazing, I love the variety of adjectives -the piece sent shivers down my spine as I read it.
Sent on Fri 9th Jul 10
Brittany says: Very good! I like your use of language, your work is very inspirational !
Sent on Fri 9th Jul 10
Brittany says: wonderful work !
Sent on Fri 9th Jul 10
uanna says: your work is brillant keep it up
Sent on Thu 8th Jul 10
jess says: Brill!
Sent on Tue 6th Jul 10
heidi says: what fab work
Sent on Mon 5th Jul 10
Beccy says: Wow this is genius !!! well done loving the ending ...
Sent on Mon 5th Jul 10
heidi says: wow jessica keep up the good work
Sent on Mon 5th Jul 10
Holly says: Wow that is some amazing work Jessica, I love the ending!
Sent on Sat 3rd Jul 10
Jessica says: This is a note from the author, thank you so much for making my work 'submission of the month'.
Sent on Sat 3rd Jul 10
jess says: You are fab!
Sent on Fri 2nd Jul 10
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